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    Categories: crows, nature, urban wildlife, weather surprises, writing process
    Posted on January 10th, 2007 | 4 Comments | RSS feed

    How many wind storms can we have in one winter? Right now, the trees in my yard are dipping and dancing, and a rolling current of crows just flowed over the neighbourhood rooftops like snowboarders over a mountain.

    The crows do seem to be enjoying themselves, but the dancing frenzy of the trees is getting me nervous. I should probably get off the computer before a branch falls on the power lines again.

    To be honest, what I really need to do is get off the internet and get to work on my current story. I have a deadline looming, and I’m not as far along in the writing as I’d like to be. I need to stay away from internet distractions (and the urge to write crow and wind haiku) until I get a serious chunk of writing done.

    I’ll leave you with two hints about the story I’m working on:

    1. I found out last spring that there are crows in Japan (really big crows).

    2. The oldest comic, or manga, in Japan is said to be the 12th century Choju jinbutsu giga (Frolicking Animals and Figures Scrolls).

    Tokyo crow

    (crow in Ueno Park, Tokyo, Spring 2006)

    Blizzard of birds

    Categories: crows, nature, urban wildlife
    Posted on December 12th, 2006 | One Comment | RSS feed

    I didn’t plan to write about crows today, but I went to pick up my daughter from school, and it was like walking into the Alfred Hitchcock movie, “The Birds.” There were crows everywhere! So many, that it was freaking out the kids. I tried to take photos, but the wind was blowing in black clouds and rain, and it was getting so dark there wasn’t enough light to focus properly.

    I’ve seen crows out sky surfing on windy days before (they actually seem to enjoy the wind), but I’ve never seen anything like this in my neighbourhood — they were in the sky, on roof tops, on the ground, on fences, in trees.

    It was like being near the roost when the crows all start arriving for the night. And it was all focused mostly around the school.

    I wonder if the loss of trees at the crows’ usual roost has set them searching for somewhere new to hang out. . . .

    a flurry of haiku

    Categories: haiku, nature, poetry, weather surprises
    Posted on December 7th, 2006 | 5 Comments | RSS feed

    Until recently, I hadn’t written any poetry for quite awhile. Then we got this sudden cold and snow, which I am totally not used to, and almost every time I looked out the window or stepped out the door, I was struck by a haiku moment.

    On one of the coldest nights, my dog went outside for a quick visit to the backyard. When I opened the door to let him back in, I stood for a moment, caught by the smell of the cold, the closeness of the sky, the breath of the house billowing out into the night…. lines of haiku began to form and reform in my mind, so that I had a hard time getting to sleep after that.

    sharp scent of cold air

    clouds drift out the open door

    absorbed by stillness

     

    gathering close

    pale sky touches white trees

    hushed in snow

     

    And from the next day:

    icicles drip

    decorating eaves troughs

    warmed by house breath

     

    during the cold snap

    rats take refuge in my attic

    the cat’s ears twitch

     

    Haiku is supposed to contain 17 syllables in lines of 5-7-5, but I don’t think it matters if you follow that exactly. What matters is the moment shared. Anyone else care to share a moment?

    In my November 29 post, “haiku snapshot,” I included a poem about a crow:

     

    black shape on white snow

    fathomless as a deep hole

    until the crow caws

     

    In the comments, my friend Jean-Pierre, who has lived in Japan for over 15 years, translated my haiku into Japanese:

    Yuki ni yurei

     Fukai ana soko nashi

     Karasu naku

     

    When he translated it back to English again, it came out:

    Ghost in the snow

    Deep hole no bottom

    Crow cries

     

    creating a totally different poem. Check out Jean-Pierre’s comment for more details about the translation process.

    Haiku snapshot

    Categories: crows, nature, poetry
    Posted on November 29th, 2006 | 4 Comments | RSS feed

    I was hoping to post a photo that combined the two themes I have going so far (crows and snow), but the crows weren’t cooperating. Here is a haiku image instead:

    black shape on white snow

    fathomless as a deep hole

    until the crow kaws

     

     

    What’s this white stuff?

    Categories: nature, weather surprises
    Posted on November 27th, 2006 | 3 Comments | RSS feed

    snowynightI was going to write more about crows, but I have to say something about the snow. Yes, snow in November on the westcoast. Last night I was down on Robson street, and people were sitting outside at restaurants and coffee shops (the usual for a Vancouver night). By the time I walked home from the Skytrain, this is what I saw.

    This morning, I woke up to a world transformed. Whenever I look at an expanse of untouched snow, I’m always hesitant to make the first footprints. The white surface is like a new canvas ready for paint or the first page of a new journal (or a new blog) waiting for words. As long as it remains white and untouched, anything is possible. Make the first mark, take the first step, and you’re committed to a direction, a pattern. But wait just a few minutes longer, hold your breath, imagine the hidden potential waiting under the snow….. For those few moments, all possibilities exist. Anything can happen.

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